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Apr 25Liked by Julie Gabrielli

Yours was the first fiction I’ve read on Substack. I loved it. And shed a few tears. Eminent domain has been so abused in this country, it is infuriating. I am originally from PA and witnessed it twice, but in a different context (new highways). My biggest problem is I subscribe to quite a few, shall we call them, current event newsletters, so I don’t have time to find new fiction writers. Yours was re-stacked and I’m so happy I stumbled on it. I’m hoping to go back and read older posts.

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Apr 25Liked by Julie Gabrielli

Bummer about fewer comments. I'm guilty. Loved the story and shared it on FB so that maybe it would impact another reader.

As a side, the story I have been revising for the past couple of weeks begins and ends with two different maple sugar seasons. In between is the story of a mountain losing one-third of its mass because of open pit mining. I follow the path of panning for gold to the superfund impact of cyanide use to gather infinitesimal gold flakes accumulated at the bottom of a heap pile. Seems are brains are working similarly.

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Apr 30Liked by Julie Gabrielli

Fun to read this part, too! Research is one of my favorite muses.

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Apr 29Liked by Julie Gabrielli

Can't seem to post a photo in these comments, but here's a Note I posted a while back with a photo of our sap boiler at Chippewa Nature Center, where I volunteer. We introduced about 1,200 students to the process this past season. It's such a great way to feel a sense of reciprocity with nature! https://substack.com/@larryhogue/note/c-51064357

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Apr 29Liked by Julie Gabrielli

My experience serializing fiction is about the same as yours.

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Love this background. Goes to show how important research is, even for fiction. I would actually call it immersion. We readers learn so much from your story - yes about the facts, but also about own resilliant human nature. Thank you.

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Apr 27Liked by Julie Gabrielli

I’m not much of a commenter typically, but I read the series and loved it!! I’m so happy you’ve shared this story.

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Apr 25Liked by Julie Gabrielli

It’s been a crazy busy couple of weeks, and I’ve been saving your 4-part series as a “reward” that I can read and savor at a leisurely pace.

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